How to Organize the Book Analysis Essay on Marguerite in The Scarlet Pimpernel

To properly organize the character sketch and conflict essay, review the attached outline.

For the character sketch essay, Marguerite experiences a conversion. Accordingly, the three traits will be composed of a consistent trait, an initial trait, and a post-conversion (new) trait. Example: "While she is consistently ______ (consistent trait), Marguerite initially is ________ (initial trait) but experiences a conversion which results in her becoming ________ (post-conversion trait)." A sentence similar to this one should be the last sentence in your introductory paragraph

As mentioned above, the three traits need to be divided into three categories: 1 consistent (a trait Marguerite has throughout the story, 1 initial trait (a trait Marguerite has before she changes, it is a more negative trait), and 1 post-conversion trait (a trait Marguerite adopts as a result of that conversion). The first body paragraph focuses on the consistent trait. The second body paragraph focuses on the initial trait.

In the third body paragraph, focus on Marguerite's conversion and what trait she adopts as a result from it. In this case, it is the opposite of her initial trait (a more positive trait).

Another key issue in your character sketch is specific examples. In each body paragraph, you need to give at least 3 specific examples to prove the main character (Marguerite) has that particular trait. Specific examples are moments, events, or scenes that show the main character saying or doing something that reveals the trait. For example, in A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens, a specific example that would show how Scrooge (the main character) is greedy is pointing out the scene in which he refuses to give any money to 3 gentlemen who ask for donations for the poor. This is a specific action Scrooge takes in the story that shows his miserly or greedy trait.

In a similar way, you need to highlight Marguerite's specific actions that reflect one of her traits. In providing specific examples, make sure you avoid general commentary like "she makes people around her feel more positive." While a sentence or two of plot summary is okay when providing context to a particular scene, avoid general commentary; stick to specific scenes and events.

For help in determining what Marguerite's traits, review the chapter notes on SetonOnline and the following link (https://support.setonhome.org/portal/en/kb/articles/what-traits-should-i-use-for-my-character-sketch-essay).